下手の横好き世界5 by William Van Hecke

C'mon Apple

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iPhone Software

Version 1.1.2

This version of the software includes additional new features, bug fixes and supersedes all previous versions.

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  1. Please use the serial comma. Omitting it is asking for trouble.
  2. Please don’t start a list of one type of item and then change the type of item partway through. Your sentence seems to say, “…includes additional new features, includes bug fixes, and includes supersedes…”.